Hmmm I kinda agree that the rain is a little cheap. Like scratches on a lens, but not really that bad. Still stand out as rain and gloomy weather. All and all though I am enjoy the picture for the most part.
The only thing I did not like really was Twi's face. I understand what you did, but her expression looks more upset then shy embarrassment at being next to AJ. Then again I am basing this on your comment about them having each other. Assuming that she is looking away blushing cause she is walking so close to AJ.
The mouth looks more pouty added to her darker brow. Maybe it's just me. Still lover your work. Looking forward to seeing more.
If it's always once upon a time in Ponyville city Why does nightfall find you feeling so alone? How can anypony be with you When your drawings are so VERY NEW And the rain is saying, "Now you're on your own!"?-Once upon a time in new york city
Ah, so it's just supposed to be a placid sort of expression kind of like AJ's? That makes more sense. Like she's just kind of lost in thought. It's just an odd angle that we're viewing them at. That and her hair-line combined with the natural shapes of her eyes just kind of plays with mine a bit. I REALLY love this picture either way ^_^
Twilight disapproves of your cheap rain effects. That or AJ isn't putting out enough... (ok couldn't resist saying that last part) So where did they move to? Or just visiting parts of Manehattan? (Ponyville in 10 years)